EDITING DRAFT 2

 

After reshooting, we started editing, I also made a rough cut in parallel for experimentation to help Alishba. As the final draft would be edited by Alishba, Sir also suggested to add some angles from this rough cut too.

This is the link to the rough cut I made:

This was the angle Sir suggested to add in the Final Cut:

2nd Draft:

In the second draft, Alishba added muted tones in the beginning, we felt like the initial clips were too long so she made them shorter to create urgency…

The brightness was reduced along with the exposure, hence it matched with the codes and conventions of crime thriller…

In the start we decided to take some extra shots, to show the co-credits, so Alishba went to the location to take some shots. I suggested Alishba to add radio sounds along with suspenseful music…. We also changed the font to a more bold one.

This is the second draft after some changes: